TBR-P "Shadowwolf" (3x cSRM6, 1x cUAC10, 5x cERMLAS, 2x JJ)

Serious business up close. Just watch that heat.

Revamped version:

 

I would build it like this:


A few thoughts:
- that single ERML in the LT doesn't make much sense IMO
- 4x SRM4s instead of 3x SRM6s, higher RoF, lower spread
- put one (IMO, one JJ is enough for a brawler, anyway) of these JJs into the torso, it won't explode and you won't lose all your JJs if your LT gets blown off

Cooler ERSL/SRM6-version for more deeeps but lesser range:

 

Indeed, i've been crippled quite a few times by losing the side torso with JJ. Your 4xSRM4 build is superior. The only thing i don't agree with is the 3 stars rating. It is a good build, just unpolished.